What do you think of my college entry letter? Please help thanks?
2010-07-03If I had to describe myself in one word I couldn’t do it. I like to think that I’m ahead of my years. As an kid I loved going to school. I used to cry and get upset if my mother signed me out for early dismissals if I had a doctor’s appointment; God forbid if I didn’t get to go to school at all for that day! You would need a mop to clean up all thoses tears. I loved going to school just to learn. Learning filled a void for me that I was missing at home. Learning made me feel special.
My childhood experince will be the driving force towards my success at The Fashion Institute of Technology. I am my biggest critic- I can’t stress that enough. This trait is due to my childhood. My mother would yell at me often, telling me that I was no good and that I would never amount to anything. I had no father around to encourage me. I was the middle child of three other brothers. I was the child that would get blamed for everything. Nothing came easy for me. So I learned at a very young age that if I wanted something, I’d have to go for it myself. I see people my age that seem to expect the world to bend over backwards for them. I feel the world doesn’t owe me. If anything, I owe the world. I owe it to myself to strive to become a productive member of society and to take pride in everything I do. I can never give up or give in, even an inch. Although I’ve been through many trials and tribulations, I’ve always found a way to succeed and at The Fashion Institute of Technology I will do just that “Succeed”.
I believe education is the key to the door of opportunities. I know it sounds so old fashioned, but it’s so true. A lot of people don’t realize that education that one receives affects the lives of the people around them, or your children that one might have some day. A good job is necessary to care for them, and education is needed for that. I’ve worked diligently my entire life, and after taking several years off from school I would like to focus my attention on school. I’m determined to succeed and take advantage of all the classes involved with your Advertising and Marketing curriculum.
I feel that I will succeed in your Advertising and Marketing program because I’ll be guided by an amazing faculty of practicing professionals. I look forward to learning such topics as creating integrated marketing communication campaigns for advertising, public relations, direct marketing, and sales promotions. I also hope to learn how to develop media plans and special events, direct and produce television and radio commercials, and write print ads, press releases, and newspaper and magazine articles.I know as a student at FIT I will bring a positive additude,excitment to learn, motivation and leadership. I can’t wait to have practicing professionals as professors that want me to succeed a much as I do.
FIT would be an amazing opportunity. Getting an education at FIT can open so many doors. FIT’s approach to teaching is so unique from any other colleges, which is the reason why I know I would benefit from your school. It’s educational approach and direct connection with the industry is what sets this school apart from the rest.
Hopefully, I’ve proved how determined and ready I am to attend your school. I could go on and on, but in the end, I would just like you to know that attending college at FIT would change my life. The chance to meet teachers and peers that are in the industry is priceless. If I am accepted into your school, it would be an honor. I would take each class seriously, and strive to get the best grades possible.With the experience I will get at FIT, I feel as if the possibilities are endless. Hopefully, you give me the opportunity to make it happen.
If anyone could help me out that would be awesome email me at chrisadamorocco@yahoo.com thanks so much